Nothingness

Nothingness

A Poem by alienkid
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Life in the perspective of someone who can't tell up from down, watching their vision and all else that is real fade away.

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My vision is extremely blurred

Reality is somewhat slurred

And somehow I feel like I’m falling

There is no sound, there is no voice, but I can hear someone calling

There is no earth, there is no sky

I am about to take a leap and fly

There is no day, and likewise no night

I am now in a high soaring flight

I see everything but there is nothing to see

I don’t know what’s happening to me

I was played in life like a meaningless pawn

I am here now but I am gone

© 2008 alienkid


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alienkid
constructive criticism always helps,
thanks =]

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we write very similar
i enjoyed this piece very much


Posted 16 Years Ago


A nicely penned expression of nothingness, indeed. I was wondering about the format. Is this what is referred to as 'poetry prose'?

A very fine write, Alienkid...

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 23, 2008
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