Broken Heart

Struggling to deal

I feel like I am always losing control

The feeling keeps coming back 

and taking hold. 

I am scared and I am lost

I am hurt and am torn. 

I am searching for you

but there is no response. 

The light only comes at a glimpse

Enough to know I reside in the dark. 

I feel love enough to know 

I have a broken heart. 

Reviews

[Rock]

very nice writing... I m glad that I took a moment to read this

[Alicia Huntley]

Thank you :)

[Rock]

You are very much welcome

[Sam]

Touching remarks, well versed.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. You had said a lot in so few words. When the darkness overtake us. We know all is lost. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Alicia Huntley]

Thank you so much! I am so happy you like it!

[CosminDZS]

Welcome fellow Canadian, this is a nice little piece about an end of romance. You clearly have an understanding of this theme, my suggestion would be for your next piece is to explore something else.

Keep up the good work!

[Alicia Huntley]

Thanks and will do! Just working stuff out of my system.

[Ashley Armstrong]

Wow. That was well written. Good job.

[Alicia Huntley]

Thank you!