Muted Sights

Heart Anatomy Poetry #6 //I'm parched and I fear I've bled too much.

Life shoots

square between the eyes;

gunshot deafening the brain;

bullet muting sight,

a deer caught in 

the middle of your hunt.

Author's Note

I've been away. I will probably be away for a while, but I hope to write down something again here before the end of this year.
Hoping you're all having a magical December x

Reviews

[emipoemi]

I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! This is profundity at its finest!! Well freaking done!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Strong words, but poetic and thought provoking. It carries a truthfulness to it about life. It's good to see you posting. Keep it up. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interestingly done analogy...

yes life will hit us right between the eyes...and often we feel like we end up on life support...not knowing if we will wake up normal...or forever wounded.