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21/08/16

A Poem by Alice Poésy
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Fleeting Thoughts #1

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All the hotel receipts are fading
along with the structure of your face,
as I stay here pacing;
Your face melting in my hands.

© 2016 Alice Poésy


Author's Note

Alice Poésy
Just random thoughts while I'm going about life. Didn't really have the time to elaborate on it.

Also first thing posted on here!! I don't even know if I'm doing this right.

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ur "fleeting feelings" taste surprisingly quite gud. u must continue writing such juxtapositions of ur montage memories under "Fleeing Feel Diary" or as a Red Journal. it could be turn into somehing.. of courses as killer (beautious) as u r by now. not sure, if u r so much into writing novels or not but yeah... someday, u can think 'bout it too... u know.. 'bout turning such "fleeting 4way fatal feelings" in chapters.. in a gr8 novel.

kinda like ur work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alice Poésy

8 Years Ago

Will do! I plan to post certain thoughts on here I want to "immortalise" :).

Thank yo.. read more



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Is this the idea of time healing all wounds? That's what I interpreted from this. Bravo. Can't wait to read more of what you post.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alice Poésy

8 Years Ago

See, this is what I like the most about poetry; the way people interpret it differently from one ano.. read more
unspokenpain

8 Years Ago

Your welcome. Hope I read more ^.^
Don't even worry if you're doing "it right," I don't believe this is a right way to write poetry.
"hotel receipts are fading
along with the structure of your face," this was killer!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alice Poésy

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! It's always nice to know that my stumbling along is considered alright.
sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Always.......
You are doing it right. And gurllll!!!!l great thoughts^-^

Posted 8 Years Ago


Pink Pastel

8 Years Ago

Of course anytime I like to return the kindness:)
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Alice Poésy

8 Years Ago

I really appreciate it :D
Hotel receipts huh...the aftermath of a tryst is what this feels like to me. Nice one though. Short and concise in the exact sweet length you very much like. Look forward to your next one though.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alice Poésy

8 Years Ago

Hehe, you're a sharp one. Thank you very much, hoping to post more soon!
Mifa

8 Years Ago

Lol...thanks for the compliment. The scenario just felt an awful bit familiar.
very intimate and lovely piece. it has a unique style representing you and i like it a lot. good work. don't worry, you're doing great! nobody here really know what it's doing either. (at least i don't, that is)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alice Poésy

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much; that's incredibly nice! I never know what I'm doing so I guess I'll fit in quite .. read more
raven

8 Years Ago

you sure will! ^_^ you're very welcome.
You don't want to forget it happened as far as I can see in this. Human connections are what puts a little light in our hearts.

You're doing fine.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gray

8 Years Ago

You want to soak up life like a sponge and retain it all. Nothing wrong with that. Just make sure yo.. read more
Alice Poésy

8 Years Ago

Great words and advice, thanks! Hope you're having a good day.
Gray

8 Years Ago

So far, so good. :)
very nice little poem, i like it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Alice Poésy

8 Years Ago

Thank you! Just small thoughts and feelings washing over, haha. Thank you for reading :)
Yeah, you're doing it right. Beautifully captured in so few words, that feeling of a fear of forgetting, or maybe a fear of being forgot. I like, thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome. Oh, and welcome :)
Alice Poésy

8 Years Ago

Thank you! You're absolutely lovely :)
Lorry

8 Years Ago

Thank you, but let's just wait and see how long that lasts :)

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Added on August 21, 2016
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