ur "fleeting feelings" taste surprisingly quite gud. u must continue writing such juxtapositions of ur montage memories under "Fleeing Feel Diary" or as a Red Journal. it could be turn into somehing.. of courses as killer (beautious) as u r by now. not sure, if u r so much into writing novels or not but yeah... someday, u can think 'bout it too... u know.. 'bout turning such "fleeting 4way fatal feelings" in chapters.. in a gr8 novel.
kinda like ur work!
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8 Years Ago
Will do! I plan to post certain thoughts on here I want to "immortalise" :).
Thank yo.. read moreWill do! I plan to post certain thoughts on here I want to "immortalise" :).
Thank you for your advice and kind words! I actually am working on a series of short stories off here based on these thoughts and certain events. I'm not so sure about them for now, but I think they could have potential.
I'm so happy we crossed paths, Rahul! Your words are very encouraging :).
Lovely work, Alice! You painted a wonderful picture with only a few words. I really liked this - it was a great read. I think it is fine without elaboration. (I tend to write poems based on random thoughts, as well. I often find that these become some of my favorites of the things I have written.)
Wonderful poem, a very nice read. Great work, Alice.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you for your wonderful words, Anastasia! Very kind :)
This was a short and sweetly wonderful piece of work.
Superb imagery! Every line coming together as clearly as they can, painting one hell of a portrait.
I genuinely loved this.
Fantastic work, and I look forward to reading more of your writing! :)
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much, this is a wonderful review! Big fan of your work so it means a lot :)
short and effective...........
powerful..........emotional.......
loved it!!!
:)
p.s. about doing it right..........i have no idea.........but this does flow perfectly for me.......
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8 Years Ago
I can't tell you how much your opinion means to me! Thank you for reading and your lovely words :)
Strong imagery. Especially the second half. Nicely written!
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much! That's incredibly nice :). Incorporating vivid imagery in my work is something I .. read moreThank you so much! That's incredibly nice :). Incorporating vivid imagery in my work is something I adore.
8 Years Ago
You're most welcome! Me too. Keep up the good work!
Short xD I like short :) means less reading. I like it.
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8 Years Ago
Haha, I feel you! Long can be stunning but sometimes I feel like short and straight to the point get.. read moreHaha, I feel you! Long can be stunning but sometimes I feel like short and straight to the point gets the job done too :). Thank you!
8 Years Ago
I just loathe reading and writing xD so short is good for me.
There's definitely something old but something pretty new; something borrowed and something very, very blue.
20 years old; redheaded, European and unapologetic. I like people who paint vivid pictur.. more..