Get Me Out

I've been living in this h o l e

that is called h o m e.

I've been talking to these s t r a n g e r s

that I don't even k n o w.

I've been searching for G o d 

or some sort of thing this isn't the e n d.

But it's a hard time believing in h e a v e n

when no one is your f r i e n d.

I've been walking on a g r a v e

that is my b r o t h e r ' s.

I don't think I can remember my m o t h e r.

I am slowly going i n s a n e

as my nails rip out my h a i r.

And the only thing that I can do is p r a y

for someone to get me out of h e r e. 

Reviews

Raw and edgy. I like it.

[joshua deathdealer]

Tragic write. Love the form and feel...xx

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is from the same cloth the classic gothic horror was cut from.
Terrifying work.

[Carrion.]

sounds tragic. I really enjoyed this, penned with raw emotion.

[light and ashes]

Wow. This is so poignant. This poem expresses inner turmoil so well.

[Humanity Is Dead]

This was horribly tragic. By that I mean it was well written and a great poem, but the idea and the point of view it was written in was tragic. Does that make sense??

[CharlesMonroe]

..I'm.....speechless

[Tasha]

Strong and dark, sometimes it feels like there is no one to help, you captured this feeling well.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really strong and dark poem!