Beautiful, Fake, Love

Beautiful, Fake, Love

A Poem by Protect Me Demons That Come At Night
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This is a collab poem with Chloe, Aaron, Danny and Si33d.

"
  All of your lies, we all
  fell for them.
  All of the times you
  said sweet things, we 
  believed you.
  But where are you
  now, darling?
  But who are you
  sleeping with tonight?
  Who are you,
  are you this
  stranger, or are 
  you this person that
  I thought I knew?
  Now, I'm glad you got
  a broken heart.

  Now you can feel
  everything I felt.
  Because I've been trying
  to fix mine from
  the start.

  I cried every night over
  you.
  I thought your lies
  were true.
  But you are still here.
  You never left you
  live in my head.
 
  Your body's dead 
  your a word 
  instead.

  Did you ever die?
  
  Did you ever really
  leave?
  Or did you
  love me?
  In my sleep I
  repeat it.

  In my dreams you
  are still here but
  what if you don't
  love me?
  Then who am I?
  But now that you've
  been shot dead,
  I have a new surprise.

  I understand it
  completely.
  You're just too big
  of a wimp.
  You're just too afraid
  of the lies and times
  and the words and curses.
  But you will miss me.
  When you play pretend.
  You will regret it.
  All of the lies and all
  of the rumors you
  will regret it.
  It will hurt you more
  than it hurt me.
  
  

© 2011 Protect Me Demons That Come At Night


Author's Note

Protect Me Demons That Come At Night
This makes no sense.
The stanzas written in italics are lines from songs.

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The best part of poetry from True Poets is when it makes little sense to the average reader. Every once in a while, you'll get a reader that is so emotionally struck, so enthralled by the poet's work that they spend their time analyzing and enjoying the mystery and feeling as they should. Those readers are worth the criticism and misunderstanding- always. Really great write, my friend, truly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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The best part of poetry from True Poets is when it makes little sense to the average reader. Every once in a while, you'll get a reader that is so emotionally struck, so enthralled by the poet's work that they spend their time analyzing and enjoying the mystery and feeling as they should. Those readers are worth the criticism and misunderstanding- always. Really great write, my friend, truly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the way you wrote this! Really a great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


awesome collab (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice collaboration write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is beautiful. And that is no lie.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful =]

Posted 13 Years Ago


You all made a great collab here.
It felt very lyrical and full of soul.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved the poem. I can't believe so many people wrote this together. It flows really well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


IT'S COOL THOUGH...collaborations that is you never know what your gonna come up with...cool poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


It makes sense...and it is a great write...and there is a lot of built up anger within this poem. I loved it though. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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