From East to West, I love you

This is the product of an assignment I was set in class. As part of a collection, we have to include a poem about our favourite place, object or person. This is mine.

In the chestnut shadow of slow-blinking eyes,

I bask in the glow of my heart’s blissful state.

Let my spine untwist as fear and loathing dies,

and smile as I kindly remember my fate.

 

Morning drifts from on East and wakes me from dream

to gaze on your face still tender with rest.

So gentle the kiss to set my heart agleam,

we entwine our souls till day fades to West.

 

A Summer’s day could do you no honour,

for in the souls depths no daylight brings

a love so pure; without chains or armour.

This fortune shared would rival Lords and Kings.

 

So take my hand as wings unfold,

glide as one through the rapture of life untold.

Reviews

[OnePiece]

From North To East To South Far West
I Vow To
Never Ever Smoke Weed Lolz
I Will Jus Fall Like A Leaf & Drift Away As Far As The Wind Blows
To Show Im Free With Thous Who Share Blows With Me
I Never OFF Balance So I Will Shoot My Prey With A Bowl An Arrow
Were You Cant See, Im A Hiding Like A Ghost On The Low
Im A Free Soul From The Hidding Mist ,
Please Dont Piss Me OF, im Already OF This Map
Trap In Darkness Where Love Dont Travel
North To East To South Far West Love Can Never BE Pure
If It Aint A Movie Script For Sure Lols

ME Being Random HEHE But I Love It , It Made Me Write To UR Poet

[Sami Khalil]

"Morning drifts from on East and wakes me from dream

to gaze on your face still tender with rest.

So gentle the kiss to set my heart agleam,

we entwine our souls till day fades to West."

[Sami Khalil]

You are extremely talented...I like your style alot...:)......................

[V. P. Trujillo]

Well done, indeed. Do you usually do free-verse?

[Alice Aries]

Thank you sir. I sort of go with whatever feeling takes me. I study creative writing, so am encouraged to write broadly. I do enjoy the older forms of poetry but often free verse is what works best.

[V. P. Trujillo]

Yes, I tend to want a bit of structure because otherwise I create nonsense, lol.