Warning

Warning

A Poem by Alyssa Walton

Warning this object is very fragile. Use with caution. She way break easily. Treat with care, love and respect. When broken don’t stay to close. You might not even notice tat she’s broken. She’s good at hiding when she breaks until she’s alone. When she’s alone all her flaws start to show and she’s not flawless anymore. Warning, she’s me.

 

© 2015 Alyssa Walton


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Alyssa Walton
ignore grammar and feedback please

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I'll ignore the grammar if you want but it bothers me. You sound pretty normal to me. It takes time to discover who we are and I'm sure as time goes on you'll start to fee better.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked it. I especially liked the part "when she's alone all her flaws start to show and she's not flawless anymore". I thought it's epic.

Keep up the good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 4, 2015
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