Humbled

How my life is been and how GOD has stepped in to stop the madness :D

 I have come to the end of myself broken down, no where else left to look. The wall has been placed up in front of me and I'm trapped. Bills, family situations, drama, surround me. I can hear the devil cackling he knows that I'm going down. My brain is fried I can't think about anymore solutions there is no where else left to look all my money is gone. So many dreams I want to achieve coming to life I see them so clearly but the money is not there so I'm stopped in my tracks, Though I keep pressing writing, singing, dancing all for the LORD it seems as if my dream will never come to pass. As I feel myself starting to slip to the ground I lift up my head towards heaven as I see the sun begin to break through the clouds. The warmness of it's rays covers my face. The love u have for me consuming my body a smile begins to spread across my face your light oh GOD breaking through the darkness trying to hold me captive! Now I hear the devil screaming HIS defeat is coming quickly. I lift up my hands toward u like a little girl reaching for her father and I cry out for you to heal me, to take back what the devil has stolen from me Oh LORD only u can achieve this feat! I drop to my knees humility washing over me. I give up MY way of doing things MY way of solving problems. Free my mind from this torment that tries to besiege me leaving me sick on the inside, my shoulders hunched over all of my pride gone. Only u Oh GOD can make this dream come true u are the miracle worker! My worship turns to praise as I remember what u have bought me through already my faith begins to rise my joy returning to me! I will have the victory I will defeat the enemy with my praise! As I begin to dance around in that dark alley I see you approaching me I see your glory and I stop in awe of your presence of your glory! The demons run in terror they know they can't win OH GOD who can stand in your presence and live? Once again I drop to my knees as you place you hand on my shoulder the love of a father to HIS daughter is pouring into me. To this day I continue to trust u never forgetting the day you met me where I was at.
 

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think :D

Reviews

[Sarah Buchanan]

You need to work on format. Paragraphs aren't even that long in stories. Break it down a little bit in order to give it a flow to make it easier for the reader to read.

Although I am not Christian I respect your beliefs and although I disagree with the content, it is still well written, except for the formating.

[lost inside]

I like it, God is always on your side when no one else seems to be.
I can feel your emotion