I am diseased

I am diseased

A Poem by alex

I am diseased
I no longer think for myself
because I am no longer myself

I am diseased
I am deteriorating
my mind and body

I am diseased
I am feeble
some may call me skeletal

I am dying
I have wasted away
none of me is left
Because I am dead

© 2013 alex


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the deterioration...i am experiencing something now that makes me relate to this very much...and that part of me is so sad.

really well written piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


good.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Direct and honest words in the poem. I like the flow of thoughts. Easy to feel diseased. hard to see the good sometimes. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


good read here well done your skill will improve as you write


Posted 11 Years Ago


A most interesting take on the death we all share - well done, good read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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alex
alex

Nashville, TN



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i dont need to tell you about me, my writing will more..

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I am nothing I am nothing

A Poem by alex


dear death dear death

A Poem by alex