You are (my religion)

You are (my religion)

A Poem by Alex Thurley-Ratcliff
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This seemed so obvious, a cliche, a common place idea... I am surprised I cannot find the words of the title (or similar) in the eg John Donne etc. But I wanted to play with it anyway, so here goes...

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You are (my religion)

you are my faith, one and true
my devotional, confessional, processional
I fool
myself, a believer, kneel to kiss
supplication suffering this, his

triptych arms flung wide
encase me warm and beating
next a semi-sacred heart
with a brushed-down breathing kiss

there's a glory and a splendour
in "blaspheming us"
our sin unites to re-present
a holy outstretched touch

so touch me and we'll love
we'll grow and re-create
our vision to expand
in flaming unity.

© 2015 Alex Thurley-Ratcliff


Author's Note

Alex Thurley-Ratcliff
OK. So this is a bit more "out there" but try it out for size - and please leave your thoughts - good, bad or indifferent :-)

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Love for and devotion to that special someone--passionately and creatively expressed.
Hi-level work, Alex!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alex Thurley-Ratcliff

10 Years Ago

Thank you, deeply.
:-)

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Added on January 18, 2015
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Alex Thurley-Ratcliff
Alex Thurley-Ratcliff

Winchester, Hampshire, United Kingdom



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