Tired

Tired

A Poem by ARLorenz
"

Written in my exhaustion

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I am tired behind my eyes

and in the spaces between my toes

 

the aching melancholy   

wanders into my body 

muddles my mind

leaves my throat closed and dry 

 

cold with lack of inspiration

sad songs make me limp

a heart infected with 

chords of the past 

 

I hunger for relief

from this exhaustion

heavy and weak

I succumb

 

 

© 2016 ARLorenz


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I really like this. I could feel the pain. This is what I am going through lately, for the first time. I love it, especially the last half, I think you expressed the feeling of heartache quite strongly.

Posted 8 Years Ago


ARLorenz

8 Years Ago

I'm glad you could relate. I am sorry you are feeling this way.

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