Repetition

Repetition

A Poem by ARLorenz
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Written while observing writers

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Why are we so afraid
of writing the same thing twice
As if repeating yourself is a failure
of some creative faculty 

Expecting each line
to contain a unique and 
unexpected morsel of wisdom 
untouched and unspoken 

I don't have anything new to say 

© 2016 ARLorenz


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I like your poem. The stanza breakdown felt natural, and the reading flow makes it a pleasant journey. I like your lines,"...Expecting each line to contain a unique and unexpected morsel of wisdom," because I am happy if at least one line in all the lines in a poem as even a touch of that. I also like your last line because I feel all writers feel that way from time to time.

Well done. Oh, and welcome to WritersCafe

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ARLorenz

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the welcome and the comments on my piece. I'm heading off to read some of yo.. read more



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I like your poem. The stanza breakdown felt natural, and the reading flow makes it a pleasant journey. I like your lines,"...Expecting each line to contain a unique and unexpected morsel of wisdom," because I am happy if at least one line in all the lines in a poem as even a touch of that. I also like your last line because I feel all writers feel that way from time to time.

Well done. Oh, and welcome to WritersCafe

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ARLorenz

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the welcome and the comments on my piece. I'm heading off to read some of yo.. read more
It is new to you and new because it is from you. You may make the same sentiment that I make but the voice is different. Very thoughtfu and creatively done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ARLorenz

8 Years Ago

thank you for the encouragement

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