Coffee shop revision

Written on my second day at the cafe

Yesterday I got it wrong

The man behind me in line was not impatient

He was late

 

Today he smiles at another customer 

And jokes about the dog doing tricks outside

Today, instead of silence from the regular crowd,

I hear laughter

 

It's a relief to know 

my perceptions are so variable

that one day I can see nothing but hostility 

and the next day nothing but love.

Reviews

[Robert Parlange]

I liked the follow-up. Life changes from day-to-day. As do our perceptions. But we're still all crazy.

[Addict With a Pen]

Perfect part 2. It makes everything even out and shows the character really changed their perspective on who 'real people' are really. Great job!