Version 1 - The Hidden Allies

Version 1 - The Hidden Allies

A Book by lexgremlin88
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This is the original version of the story. Kinda keeping most of it for the new version, but it helped bring around some good ideas all the same :)

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© 2013 lexgremlin88


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Hi guys,

I've had a suggestion from another website to discard the prologue and the first part of chapter one. It's been suggested to start from when the boys get home after the gym and tighten things up from there. What do people think?

Thanks

Alex :) x

Posted 11 Years Ago

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lexgremlin88
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Hi there. I've been a story writer since I can remember, thanks to my Nan. I used to spend hours over the summer holidays writing short stories and unfortunately most of those have been lost. So n.. more..

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