Death (and apocalapse)

Death, 

Why have you fled from me?

Why won't you grant my everlasting wish?

I have shooken the hand of dout,

And bowed down to thy mercy!

Death,

Why won't you find me,

Your glare is sizzling through my body,

THE PAIN IS UNBEARABLE!

LIKE FIRE, I'M BURNING!

I'M SCREAMING, I'M HURTING!

Death,

The blood has covered the holy mother,

You have claimed SO much...

So why not claim me?

Why leave me laying here?

As you sway by with your pale horse...

THE VULTURES SHALL FOLLOW!!!

Will the rain drown me?

Open up my sores!

Will the rocks fall on me?

Come down from their pillar of fire!

Prophetic,

We will end with a whimper,

Death,

kill me,

i'm empty.....

Reviews

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If I had to describe your poem in one word, I would say it is intense. And that, is something I absolutely love about it. My eyes hurried down the screen like rats down a corridor. I was bursting with curiosity as I breathed in the desire to continue reading your story. There is so much emotion, so much passion in your words that I was left frozen for just one second. I adored your word choice, and was by your captivating tone. Thank you for sharing!