love these lines:
"Keys of a piano that flew to a grave
A land without wonder, a heart song could not travel
A timeless time wears on it
But not once did the key-less piano stop playing
Nor the string-less guitar"
your words really speak for themselves very nicely,
Great Job!
Wow I see u have took it to another level, i would have never thought of something like this. I love the part about the guitar and piano! Great and creative write it was absolutely beautiful! :)
this was so heart-warming [the irony...] and it was really beautiful and sincere. I like how you took it to a higher level, it was so much more specific, and it said alot more. Amazing piece, I loved reading this.
love these lines:
"Keys of a piano that flew to a grave
A land without wonder, a heart song could not travel
A timeless time wears on it
But not once did the key-less piano stop playing
Nor the string-less guitar"
your words really speak for themselves very nicely,
Great Job!
I've missed reading your work Alex! xD
This is amazing, like always. I had never really considered the whole idea of a heartsong before, but reading your poem definitely made me think about it.
"My heart song for you plays to this day/A broken rhyme, a guitar that snapped/Keys of a piano that flew to a grave" is a mindblowing section! This poem held a lot of truth, and a lot of insight. The emotion behind your words were priceless. Nice work,
~PaperHearts
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