Tears of a Heart

It doesnt work right.

"It's broken."

The girl with the up-side down face gleams

"See look, it doesn't work anymore."

She's right.

It never did love right anyway.

Author's Note

Comments are great.

Reviews

[Art Sun]

Nice work...funny how even love becomes broken,,,

[Antonio Valentino]

Alex, this was redunkuless! Loved it!

You're the bomb.com!
Antonio :)

[Princy]

O_O whoa! I love short poems which convey big messages!
True, the end is so powerful!

[Alisa_the_fluff_ball]

This is freakin AWESOMENESSNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Purly AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! GIVE ME YOUR AUTOGRAPH BECAUSE YOU ARE GONNA BE FAMOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't even have a favorite line...I love it all!

--Alisa_the_fluff_ball

[Destinee]

"it never did love right anyway" such a powerful ending. I really really loved this. such an emotional story in so few words. awesome job!