Sing- Unfinished Song

Sunflowers in a glass.

Looking at the rain and seeing the past.

Again I'm left to myself,

not knowing if I'll be ok,

Wondering what with you,

How did things come so un glued

yeah someone tell me I'm ok.

am I ok?

Chorus

:I sing for the brokenhearted,

the ones left after things got started,

shattered to pieces on the floor.

Droped from the life line,

Thinking was this all at a waste of time?

To everyone raise your glass to the new

cause for everyone feeling blue,

yeah, I'm singing for you.

Light up my sky,

like every single night

I had with you & I dont see how it could go up from here

No, I dont feel ok,

but tell me that I'll be ok

 

-Chorus-

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A good start to the song. I like the flow of thoughts and the chorus. Music is hard to write. To sing words. Must have flow and good meaning. I hope to read more.
Coyote