Me and My

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Wasting my brain a lot,
playing mindless games,
rather would I be a s**t,
than a person without aims.

Nobody gets the point,
neither do I alone,
when I light up a joint,
I stink up my home.

In comes my buddy,
seeing something's wrong,
he dares not ask me,
simply he stays for long.

He gives me company,
and comfort of most,
not knowing about the harmony,
that I have never lost.

It is carved into me,
the falls feeling of remorse,
never have I felt agony,
nor true and honest loss.

Am I deaf to feelings,
the answer to me is hidden,
look at me searching for meanings,
of what have I been given.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Legacy]

Good morning Alexander,

Meanings~ indeed, it is true, we all search for meanings for the things we do not understand. Believing that one day we will find the answers � I wonder though, do meanings really hold the key to our understanding of our actions? Is it true that sometimes there are meaningless actions we portray? Can we question ourselves for the things we do; or is it fact that we just move on from one point that we do not regard as 'good', only to reach another?

I feel you are trying to express to us the turbulent emotional conflicts of your current season� Also do I hear that you have made your choices in life � there has been no hardship, you just simply made those choices, however in the last 2 lines of the last stanza you state:

"look at me searching for meanings,
of what have I been given."

"Given" being the optimum word here, I understand and empathize with your questioning yourself as to your decisions.

This poem has made me look deeper inside of myself to find out if I too have been dealt certain things or have I made the choice to do them.

One more question here� If your buddy comes in to see something is wrong, how can he truly see something that isn't there? I suppose what I am asking you is� is there really something wrong?
I appreciated you pointing my direction this way, I see your writing potential � for you do have the stanza and rhyme pattern down.

"nobody gets the point,
neither do I alone,"

This one is really making me think, I understand that there are a few definitions for the word "aim - searching for the thought process that best suits what you are saying "nobody gets the point". Our purpose-driven efforts only go unnoticed, "allowing no one to see the point", if this is the motivation behind what we do.

Food for thought, I had to reread your bio about a half a dozen times, intertwined with both of your writes. I must agree prejudice in any form and/or facets, is one thing our world indulges in to satisfy a validation of who we are. My concern though is a use of a word called {hate} that was mentioned a few times, for me � personally, I would suggest 'dislike'� its not as judgmental because you are portraying feelings ; not passing judgment, correct?


Have a great day.

Legacy

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