Sugar coated lives

Sugar coated lives

A Poem by faint smile
"

not everything is what it appears to be

"

vanille life, covered with cream

Its not what it always seems

on top the sprinkels,underneathe the lies

Layered to make us believe our lives

tears are forgotten,with sugar rain

chocolate thunder,rolls over  pain

marshmellow clouds,In a sea of blue

sugar-coated life, reveal the truth

 

 

 

© 2011 faint smile


Author's Note

faint smile
my shortest poem

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really unique, i loved it.


Posted 12 Years Ago


it shows that people live behind facades. it may look like everything is peachy but there could be so much hidden like pain or death. excellent poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this one. It gave me the feeling of knowing that eating too many sweets will make one sick. Very nicely worded.

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


I liked this, such insight

Posted 12 Years Ago


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JRB
nice words for inner thoughts, nice write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh WOW i loved this, This is wonderful,
A talented piece. Amazing write

Posted 12 Years Ago



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faint smile

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