My house of dreams

My house of dreams

A Poem by faint smile
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this is another poem written by my eight year old cousin, her name is Leah

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I fly,I swing,I dance,I sing

All this is done in my house of dreams

its fantastic here, All the things I can do

there's never a lie, its always true

its pure and innoccent like a child

Thats makes comming here worth my while

 

some people call me crazy cause I like my house better then reality

but if living in a better world is crazy,I should really question my sanity

A world thats washed with innoccent tears.

where nothing is hidden and no one fears

I know its not right,and as crazy as it seems.....

I would forever live in my beautiful house of dreams

© 2011 faint smile


Author's Note

faint smile
I did NOT change ANY words in this poem this all came from the mind of 8 years old Leah :) she wants to write a poetry book, so do you think she can do it?

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A world thats washed with innoccent tears.
where nothing is hidden and no one fears
I know its not right,and as crazy as it seems.....
I would forever live in my beautiful house of dreams

This part is very well written and wonderful.
I enjoyed this write. Awesome job!


Posted 12 Years Ago



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faint smile

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