Only a mothers love.

this isn't my best work but I think the message is ideal so what do you think??

One night a married couple was driving down a road when they seen a lady standing on the side of it, the wife told the husband that he should just keep going, so they did.As they came closer it appeared that the lady was wearing a white gown with blood splotches on it so the man pulled over and asked if she was alright.

 She had explained to the man that her and her family had been in a car accident, and that her husband was dead and she needed help saving her newborn baby. The man let her into his car and she showed him where the car accident happened. The man told the women and his wife to stay in the car while he went to go get the baby. When the man arrived to the car he didn't seem to notice that there were two bodies slumped in the front seats.

 After the man had the surprisingly healthy newborn baby he went back up to the car, only to see that the women had left.He asked his wife where she could've gone but the wife said the women ran down after the man,so the man went back down to see if she was there.

 When he got there he saw a man in a blue suit dead in the driving seat and in the passenger seat there was a women dressed in white with blood all over her. To the man surpirise the women dead dressed in white appearred to be the women who stopped them.

Author's Note

I know this story is kinda cliche, but it was just an idea that poped in my mind

Reviews

[Z]

I like the idea of it! It'd be even better if there were more suspense and detail in this. But as a very short idea, it's nice. I do have to agree that it's cliche. And I see this post is years old (oops, I was going through the discover stories and I was brought here). But, if you ever wanted to go back and redo this, I'd say add more suspense and detail and it'd push the fact that its cliche right out the window.