imagine.....

imagine.....

A Poem by faint smile
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I actually didn't write this my little cousin did she's eight years old as of today and she made a special request that I do this so if you do review it please don't be mean.

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Imagine if stars were in the ground
so everyone could touch them
would there still be anger around?
If everyone could float on clouds,cookies rained and no one pouts
would the world be the same?
if children laughed and played all day, If not one tear was on a face
would frowns be left instead? Or would a smile suddenly appear,
Would all the bad people just disappear? 
would clowns not scare me? and bees not sting?
I wish the world was only green 
but I can't do much but imagine......

© 2011 faint smile


Author's Note

faint smile
thanks for reading and listening to her view of the world, (the picture is a baby picture of my little cousin)

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Effective wording. Imagination-bound indeed! The whole world might not be able to change in your image, but the environs and people that encompass you can be with enough will and dedication. I enjoyed the write, thanks.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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