escape

A room, four walls padded,one door locked.

Holding this demon I'm trying to block

I try to control this uncontrollable rage

They think they can stop it,keeping me in this cage.

I heard I was crazy,every since birth

But, I'm not a serial killer I'm just cleaning up the earth

When I'm outside I look as normal as can be 

But I know I'm not normal, come up you'll see

When I get you in my hands there's no changing fate

I have a killer grip,just try and escape

So don't try to fight it as I pull out my blade

Don't try to plead just watch your life fade

And as I get closer and you smell my sweat

There' nothing left in your life to regret

I take my blade and draw a smile from ear to ear

Then I write a note in blood saying:"N.E. was here"

Author's Note

PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK? and what do you think "N.E" means?

Reviews

[Speak in Silence]

This is so awesome, I haven't seen a good one about murder/serial killers in a while lol, great work. p.s. I kinda peaked at the other comments so I know N.E. means No Escape lol

[faint smile]

lol thanks! and I expect people to know what N.E. means lol

[faint smile]

now

[Speak in Silence]

lol you're welcome :) lol and that's very true ;D

[EMMIE]

Huh...N.E. what can that be? Thinking, thinking, thinking... your first few lines make think about mental institution patients and maybe this is all in their head, the demon, the voice...very puzzling and I love it! Anything dark is my cup of whiskey great job!

[faint smile]

Thank you!!! and uhm N.E., well the E stands for escape do you know what the N stands for now? its a simple 2 letter word :) haha thanks so much for the review!

[EMMIE]

No? No Escape!

[EMMIE]

Ha! Clever!

[faint smile]

Yes! you got it! haha!

[EMMIE]

Yeeeey

[faint smile]

be my friend so I can read some more of your writing?

[EMMIE]

Yup!