Gone

This person realizes how horrible she is, but by then, it is too late.

The world collapsed under my feet. I fell through to hell. I deserved this; I committed great evils. I always wanted everything, and took no care toward what others wanted. When I finally realized this, it was too late. I was already gone. Now, I wonder, is there anyway back to where I once stood?

Reviews

[Daiku Maryu]

This is very short--I don't know what the person did, why they felt it's evil. Maybe if you filled it out a bit more, it would have a stronger effect?