Alone

Alone

A Poem by Exa Lectric
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Sitting alone...

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Sitting alone

In darkness

Rain pattering

 

Sitting alone

Everyone

Sleeping soundly

 

Sitting alone

Thunder roars

Lightning flashes

 

Sitting alone

On the floor

Quiet, thinking

 

Sitting alone

Powerless

No escaping

 

Sitting alone

By myself

No one hears me

 

 Sitting alone

Try to sleep

In the darkness

 

Sitting alone

Light appears

Morning has come

 

Sitting alone

I realize

I do not have to be alone.

 

© 2009 Exa Lectric


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This is a great poem and I really like the colors. They worked well with the flow of the poem. Awesome work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like the poem, I like the message. I'm not in love with the colors, at least on my crappy old CRT, they're pretty vivid and distracting.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful poem. It flows nicley. I like the colors too. I like the ending, it's true, that we don't have to choose to be alone. Sometimes, we are alone and it is our own fault! Good point!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 7, 2009