Rain

I watched the skies,
As they turned red,
What was once the moon's domain
Was now the sanctuary of clouds,
Hovering over us.

I saw the lightning,
So bright and sharp,
I heard the thunder,
So loud and clear,
I felt the rain,
So cold and soothing,
as I stood alone in the dark.

Rain, rain,
How beautiful you are,
With your lavishing winds
And sonorous sounds,
Your little drops of water, they trickled down my lips, to my tongue,
You tasted magnificent.
Oh how you intrigued my soul!


I reached out to you, as I cried,
Like a helpless child lost in an alley,
And you showered upon me,
With little mercy...you cleansed me,
You savored me....you made me breathe once more.

As I looked up to you again,
With swollen eyes,
The melancholy I saw, fading...
The world weeped away it's sorrows, and with it's tears,
It had washed away mine as well.

Reviews

[Arsh]

I reached out to you, as I cried,
Like a helpless child lost in an alley,
And you showered upon me,
With little mercy...you cleansed me,
You savored me....you made me breathe once more.

Sounds interesting! The above phase's one of my favorites. You write very deep pieces even the choice of your words're quiet impressive. I look forward to reading your work!

[Alexandra]

Thank you :) I'm really glad you enjoy my writing. I look forward to keeping everyone entertained :D

[Arsh]

Even you`re oneself a sculpture of happiness so, needless to say, you sure entertain your loved ones (readers) allowing them to blow along the incense of yous through... your poetic work. So, again.. it`s been a pleasure to me to taste what you just cooked. Keep writing!

[Alexandra]

Thank you so so much. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

[Arsh]

4-hearts.. took my every beat away ..even from my own heart. Alas~~peace.

[BlueDreams]

Wow What a lively write it was! I could feel it all actually happening! You have beautifully detailed the scenario :) Just Wow :*

[Alexandra]

Thank you so much :D I'm glad you liked it

[BlueDreams]

I really did :) It was my pleasure :)

[Frieda P]

Cleansing rains upon the soul, sometimes it's just that way, we need a good soaking to rid ourselves of the pain. I really like how you pen'd these rainy sentiments Alexandra.

[Alexandra]

Thanks Frieda! Don't you just love it when it rains? I literally do stand out in the rain, looking for answers.

[Frieda P]

I guess it depends on my mood, some days I want to dance in it and others it can be depressing as bloody 'ell....my pleasure Alexandra.