earthquake

a funny love i've got for you

a slow low rumbling earthquake love

that goes unnoticed and doesn't register as anything

but a heartbeat

out of rhythm for a moment

and then a wave.

one that swallows

every creature living in my dreams.

Author's Note

written february 21/22, 2011

Reviews

[Hayley]

i really like the comparison for the earthquake and love. Unexpected, and it works, as does the length as well. Very enjoyable.

[Lenard L. Banks III]

Beautiful write.