Pegasus

Very short poem 'bout a Pegasus.

Pegasus

He flies through the skies, updrafts carry him higher. He flies swiftly, his feathers fingering the wind like an instrument, playing a beautiful song. Never stopping, never ending beauty.

Author's Note

Write about how you huys think I can improve it or what you think I should add.

Reviews

[Jennifer Shaw]

Sometimes, shorter is sweeter. There are times when only a few words are required to inspire a beautiful mental image. This is simple and sweet! Also, I like the fantasy/mythology theme that your writing seems to be following. You sbould really write a short storybook! Your writing could enchant the dreams of young children being read to sleep. =)

[Alina]

Thank you! I think I'll try to do so on my next book called Crowchild.