My Heart

My lonely heart

Wants out to play.

It’s a little shy,

Just give it a wave.

And if it hides,

Or tries to stray,

Take my heart with you

Anyway.

Author's Note

Remember when I didn't write poems?! Thanks for reading, friends.

Reviews

[J. Land]

Greatness. The secret desire of wallflowers everywhere. Love it.

[My Favorite Writer !]

When I read above, I can visualize a lil girl staring a bunch of guys playing and wishing..they would ask her too.. a sheer delight !

[Alene Parr]

Too kind! Thank you!

[Marie]

THat's very sweet. It's like a valentine.

[Alene Parr]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[wordman]

put it on a leash take it for a walk then we can sit and have a talk

[Alene Parr]

Haha. Thanks for reading!

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice little rhyme. Keep writing

[Alene Parr]

Thanks for reading!

[A. Amos]

Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done!

[Alene Parr]

Thanks so much for reading!

[Sami Khalil]

An overwhelming wave of poetic beauty you share with us.
"Take my heart with you"
The great offer. You will have many takers....:)....

[Alene Parr]

Thanks so much for reading. I'm flattered by your comments. Glad you enjoyed it!

[Sami Khalil]

I did. You are welcome...:)....................