Breath From My Lungs

Breath from my lungs

Hung in the air.

The only sign

That I am

Alive.

Author's Note

Why did you encourage my poetry writing? Now I can't stop.

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

So much said in so few words.

[Alene Parr]

Thanks so much for reading. :)

[don't know]

A few words can say a lot nice write.

[Alene Parr]

Thanks so much for reading! Cheers!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Such and interesting play with words nice write

[Alene Parr]

Thank you for reading and for the comment!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a powerful short write. It packs a punch! Lydi**

[Alene Parr]

Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it! Cheers!

[Dr. Wood ?]

creepy stuff really.......I can imagine a few situations where this may be true......the shattered soldier in the battered trench....a fugitive.....even a jilted man after a torrid argument......Very very good

[Alene Parr]

Thanks so much. Coming from someone as talented in poetry writing as you, this means a lot.

[Dr. Wood ?]

well thanks for the praise...My stuff is simple really.....But Thanks

[wordman]

this is full of suspence but you know you are alive and blooming like a butterfly

you was meant to write now give us somemore

[Alene Parr]

Your reviews are always too kind, seriously! You're giving me a big head and now I'll never stop writing poems. But, really, thank you for reading. Always appreciated. Cheers!

[wordman]

don1t forget us when you are a famous writer