The Green Aura

The Green Aura surrounds me and youuuuuu

Take some time to see what I'll do

To you it can only be soo true

But by me, it means more you knew keeps me waving my head in the pues

I fly away with my friends to find a seat next you or maybe just a spot in the aisle 

To keep dipping this richness in something you don't just file

Like from the pixels to the windows or even to the tiles 

Remembering everything you promised in this vial, you know you have my trust like healthy bowel

After everything is found in the fire 

You pictures will scream like chords in every song throughout this wire

I serve to please your holy satire 

To keep my hopes burning up like these tires

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"After everything is found in the fire
You pictures will scream like chords in every song throughout this wire
I serve to please your holy satire "
Wow. Those lines grabbed my attention along with the whole rhyming scheme of this wonderful poem.( Holy satire)can be a wonderful title for a poem for I like unique titles and unique ideas. Up to you though. You are a blooming talent on this site...Please send some read requests when you post new things...:)..............

[alen]

Thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................

[paddy d daly]

to be honest I did not like the first verse, the u's after you put me off, the second verse began to drag me into it even if the last line was a little long, I really liked the last verse, it had something to it that hit something in me, but who am I to judge, mine are up there to be judged too.

[alen]

I was trying not to be opininionated in my writing, thank you soo much for the review

[paddy d daly]

you are welcome.

[Linda alexander]

After everything is found in the fire
You pictures will scream like chords in every song throughout this wire
I serve to please your holy satire
To keep my hopes burning up like these tires

Excellent write, metaphor is excellent, keep going, enjoyed