~ Prologue ~

Could this be what love really feels like?

"Innaysia. But you can call me Inny."

I was afraid of what he might think. I knew I liked him. There was something about the way he stood there, staring at me, with a quizzical glint in his hazel eyes. My heart didn't skip a beat or anything cliche like that, I simply felt the world stop rotating for a second, and an unconsealable smile tugged at my lips.

 

I know I'm too young to fall in love. But, what else could this be?

It was from that moment, when I introduced my unusual name to the boy with the chestnut hair, I realised life would never be the same.

Author's Note

I know it's short, will edit later

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

It's a GOOD start. The name threw me a bit. In the states, for most I would assume, the word means "bellybutton that is a hole and doesn't stick out". : ) I actually thought you were going to write about your bellybutton!! I figured, "What the Heck?" lol Is there a way to keep posted of your story? I don't read many stories on here..... xoxo -Mark

[Alekaneka]

Thanks sooo much! Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon...

[Patrick Henry]

Are you writing it for school, for fun, with others...... What do YOU like about your story coming to light on here? xoxo -Mark

[Alekaneka]

Just for fun, haven't written much in a while, do I had a burst of inspiration and thought I'd better run with it. Hopefully I'll get lots of feedback and my writing will in-turn improve

[Patrick Henry]

To me, the best part of writing is the character building. You can make the craziest list ever, and write down what her quirks, turn-ons, fears, style, features... all look like. When I write my stories, I spend the whole first paragraph, looking around the room, and nothing else!! lol Don't know why. If "Inny" were to start falling for this guy, whoever he is, is she starting to scribble in her diary, telling friends she has a nameless crush, finds herself "kissing mirrors...lol", and maybe shyly stalking him with simple "Hello!!"'s and finding weird ways to spend time with him, without him picking up on it. Maybe he sees it as "Wow. She has the same interests as me.... just a little different." Keep in touch with me... I want to know where this goes. O.K.? : ) xoxo -Mark

[Alekaneka]

Sure will, almost done the first chapter :)

[Alekaneka]

First chapter is up...working on the second, let me know what you think please?

[Lozzie]

Oooo... Romance... Okay lets see where this goes XD

[Alekaneka]

I course its romance :P have I ever written anything worth even maybe reading that's not ? :P

[Lozzie]

Ummm... your chapters from Unforgiving Moon????

[Alekaneka]

I forgot about that...

[Lozzie]

why? :( Its a good book and I am determined for us to get in finished!! I don't know whether we can co-author books on this though :/ i'll check it out...

[Alekaneka]

All our stuff on there is lost :( all bio, and feelings and my projects that I wanted to continue :(
But unforgiving moon shall be finished! U never know I might come back and do a bit myself :)

[Felicity's Eve]

This is great so far.

The plot is awesome and I can hardly wait to see where this leads! :)

On to next chapter...