I love how you take such simple things and creat magic wording, a whole life in a simple poem.... thank you so much , you sure one of my favorite here..... Keep writting :) Yossi
Yanno, I've been thinking and this wonderful poem hits close to home for me today. Forgive my tangent please but I've recently realized how we just never know when we are going to come across a piece that touches us in a big way, but if we fail to look for it or read it, then for sure we are going to miss out. It all really begins with the birth of your story, once you've opened that door, every thing else becomes a possibility. Make sense?