mine to savor

an expression of love

easily,like melted butter you seep through my senses like the words i only mutter you mix up my tenses i frighten myself only once, when i think of loving you more

thirstily, like a nomad i explore you like no man like a master artist's work you fix standards on a new high, shade for sunny days and balm from frightening rays you're everything and nothing just mine to savor

Author's Note

all reviews are welcome

Reviews

[mishka]

I like this. it's definately refreshing. like having a happy thought on a cloudy day. :)

[SarcasticPoet31]

Once I seen melted butter, I knew this would be a great poem, well done.

[onyoche]

thank you for your kind review

[Jared Michael Smith]

I enjoy this poem very much, but I would make a small suggestion. I feel like the line "words I only mutter" doesn't flow as well with the rest of the words, at least in my mind. You might want to consider revising there, but other than that, it's fantastic. :-)

[onyoche]

i would consider it...thank you

[Jared Michael Smith]

You're welcome. ^_^

[Sami Khalil]

The title , the poem , the imagery all all wonderful...

"like a nomad i explore you like no man"

[onyoche]

am glad it appeals to your artistic sense.thank you