so much more

so much more

A Poem by onyoche
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like i see it
you can sit on your tush
and read another's fix it
or reach for the stars
then replace it
true, there'd be wars
that test your depth
so, take your aim
and give it your best,
the world is not a stage
so, please dont perform
its the real deal
so, take off the con.
you're more than you first thought
you're so much more

© 2013 onyoche


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onyoche

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I like the positivism in this wise poem...Bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


onyoche

11 Years Ago

its a unique view..i like it..thanks
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......
My favorite line is "the world is not a stage, so please dont perform."
Excellent-haha-I love it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

onyoche

11 Years Ago

thank u so much..performing in everyday life takes the fun right out
mishka

11 Years Ago

Not to mention, gives youba false impresssion of who you really are,over.time.

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