Darling

Darling

A Poem by alduin
"

are you afraid?

"

they say eyes are the gateway to your soul

your eyes are a river, peaceful and chillingly cold

darling, are you sad?

keeping in all those tears must be hard

but you act like a readable, open card

darling, are you afraid? 

because i can see it through your eyes

you're slow at hellos, and fast for your goodbyes

darling, why are you so scared to be here?

unless

i am the one you fear

© 2014 alduin


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alduin
pbtbtbtbt. bored.

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I really love teh line "you're slow at hellos and fast for your goodbyes" - it almost sounds like a great country song. What a line!

Posted 10 Years Ago


alduin

10 Years Ago

Haha, thank you!
they say eyes are the gateway to your soul
your eyes are a river, peaceful and chillingly cold
darling, are you sad?

I am caring you ace dear. Great poetry.

Posted 10 Years Ago


alduin

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much. :)

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hey. please call me ace. i'm a young aspiring author who's dream is to published, and inspire others. i want someone to look at me and say "because of you, i didn't give up." more..

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