lupine/lupine revisited

a rewrite and addition

tonight stars collide,galaxies die

and universes will be born

tonight I gaze upon strange angels

while chaos dreams alone

tonight we will drink sweet poison

the essence of the knife

and as we scream beneath the moon

lost souls will reach the sky

 

the revisit

jaded eyes still shine

a jaded heart that matches mine

encased in beautiful flesh and lovely bone

sadly beats a heart of stone

galaxies die stars collide

universes will be born

as I gaze upon a strange angel

while chaos dreams alone

together we will drink sweet poison

the essence of the knife

and as we scream in ecstasy

lost souls will reach the sky

Reviews

[Crazy Cat Man]

brutal

[HorrorMaster]

Very good

[JRB]

this was great in thought and wording,
Jan/uisiom

[Mr. Lopez]

What a great display of few choice words painting such a grand master piece. You inspire others while invoking much thought. One for the library. I loved it !!

Mr.Lopez