black light

a piece that was chopped for an old song revamped on it's own accord this morning...

moon light shines in her  eyes

pure black light  is her hair

all that watch as she passes by

fall into despair

misery unto me the killers rape

and then go free

tear the sky

penatrate

broken will

subjugate

sensations of symmetry

sexual energy

show me the secrets of your skin

I'll show what I know of sin

a perfect moment we could create

take my hand I know the place

sensations of symmetry

sexual energy

possesion

murder

obsession

love

Reviews

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Imbued with a primordial energy - very raw - yet I quite like it

[HorrorMaster]

Awesome dark side of love.

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

A dark side of love!!!! Loved it

[Stephen Ownby]

Ahh, the dark side of love. Nicely chosen words and I like the rhyme of "symmetry" and "energy". Very metal m/.

[Glory Writer]

I'm sure these were very sinful thoughts but I like this one, a lot. It's real emotions, I guess :) I like the way you write.