Taming of the Shrew

nuttn to do w/ shakespeare...

Suck on your mother's

Corroded bosom.

Sip the slime.

And your father will have

Sulphuric aid for his midnight appetite

Whilst you dream of suicide.

 

She locked me behind

The cellardoor, behind

The most beautiful word.

Plead non compos mentis, dear shrew

And await forgiveness.

 

Yours is an ill-fated infatuation.

Two stars in separate constellation.

Incompatible for she is innovation.

Your man is obsolete.

Therefore, Shrew! Ignore me not

Lest you perish and ignore

The sun and its incandescent rantings.

Author's Note

i pray i dont have to give her this...ever

Reviews

[jen -- JG]

A sad hard time when words like these explode to cover the hidden deep hurts in the soul.

Your words evoke mental images of a strong mental agony and yet also waver on the brink of a depressive despair. I feel it is only the vengeful thoughts that keep you from falling here.

A strong poem a good write.

jen-JG

[Sabine]

an existential invention, super witty! Sabine*

[Radioactive-Nuclear-Kid..]

Wow........... I'm glad I'm not the one this is addressed to.
such potent bitternesss... is who trouble yuh suh?

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

This is very unique.
It's great.
I loved it.
I love your word choices.
Very powerful.
I absolutely love the title.
Excellent rythme.
Awesome structure.
Good flow of words.
Wonderfully written.
Great Job!
^_^

[Liam]

Damn, you have a really unique (and bitching) style of writing. I love it. You're fantastic, I'm going to look at your other stuff.

[Emily B]

ha! this is great!

[Angel's Lady]

Yours is an ill-fated infatuation.
Two stars in separate constellation.

Oh my...have I stumbled into an incandescent ranting? I love your mix of words, swirling them around and spitting out a different picture on each spin. Wonderful.

[Anima Inspired]

Powerful...wow... This was written with such a powerful and poignant hand!

[Laura E. Aranda]

Thank you for coming by to read some of my newer work. I was intrigued by the title and saw it was entered into a contest so Good-luck to you! Thanks again! Cheers, lea