Less Than Three

I decided to write a poem using math terms. I'm not sure how I feel about it though.

Distant circumference of lateral kind
Your love's an equation, made in my mind
Radial design that quality shows
Tangent transcendence of all that I know

Deliberate folly, exponents make
A sequence of failure in me, I break
So calculate risk and factor in flaws
Formulate list and forget the cause

For healing that heart, prismatic in light
I knew from the start, that you wouldn't fight
Project all your claims and follow your pride
While sins and denial, both coincide

And finding this truth, I came to equate
With unsolved problems, all fueled by our hate
In our conclusion I came to accept
Fresh in the sorrow, I live in regret

Insanity takes it's toll

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

In our conclusion I came to accept
Fresh in the sorrow, I live in regret
A nice write...

[rnuff]

deep emotional write, nicely expressed

[Akira Kodama]

I liked this a lot. The rhyme scheme is good and flows nicely. Good work.