There’s something about
stargazing that’s good for the soul.
It takes you out of yourself.
It makes you forget about your troubles.
It makes you feel small, but
it forces you to think big!
If I want to see the night
sky really clear and star-sharp I climb to the top of the hill beyond the
village and I lay down just as the suns rays are disappearing. I wrap up my
coat and put it under my head. In a little time the first star appears and in
no time the sky is ablaze.
I remember when I was young I
just gazed up with what I suppose was a sense of wonder. It’s the sense of
wonder that you don’t get often - maybe holding a new born babe, maybe the view
from a mountain top or maybe your first view of a rainbow. The night sky is just so - words fail you here
- damn big and impressive!
At first you just glance up
and it seems like a great handful of sparkle has been thrown over the night sky.
It’s awe-inspiring in a mindless sort of way but then you watch more carefully
over a while and you start to notice things. Things like; the pattern of stars
stays the same from night to night; this star pattern rotates round in the sky
during the course of the night; there are some stars (lets call them planets) that
wander through the star pattern in a predictable way from night to night and
month to month. You’ll notice a great band of milky light that straddles the
sky - it appears to contain stars without number.
If you keep watching long
enough you’ll notice some special things that happen. You’ll see what look like
stars that shoot across the sky brightly and burn out. There will be more of
these at certain times of the year. Occasionally you’ll notice brighter stars
that move through the star pattern slowly with glowing tails. At times you’ll be
awestruck by stunning curtains of coloured light that flicker in the northern
sky.
At some point, if you have an
enquiring mind, you’ll move onto the next stage and start to ask questions. Are
the stars like our sun? How are the planets and sun arranged? (one of the
tougher questions!) Where did the stars come from? (seriously tough!)
Then my thoughts moved on to my
(our) place in this celestial grandeur. All these stars that I can see look
like they might be like the sun but further away. Is it possible that they too
have their own group of planets? Could there be planets circling round some of
these stars that have life on them? Is it possible that some of that life might
be like us?
My advice is don’t waste your
time thinking about this - if you had as many astronomers as there are stars in
the universe you’ll still never get the answer. The truth is that no-one will
ever know. We’re stuck here and always will be, and so are they (if they exist),
and never the twain will meet! End of story!
But - we can’t stop thinking!
Later in the night the yellow
moon rose over the Azure
Mountains and dimmed the
stars - and my speculations. Some time later our second moon, larger, brighter and of a
reddish hue appeared and the stars disappeared altogether. My stargazing was over for the
night and after slipping on my coat, I lit my lamp and retraced my steps carefully to the village.
However, I was still pondering the
question that a night of stargazing always seems to swirl around in my mind.
Words do fail when you are watching something as awe inspiring as the stars…..which makes it kinda difficult to mention in a story, but you’ve done a great job here with it Alan.
I doubt there will ever be a resolution to our many thoughts of the night sky, but it sure beats being stuck in front of the telly
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I'm lucky to have spent a lot of time out in the dark and high in the mountains where the sky is ama.. read moreI'm lucky to have spent a lot of time out in the dark and high in the mountains where the sky is amazing. If you live in a city you never see the stars. I bet stone age humans knew all about the sky.
Thanks for reading this Lorry.
Alan
Your fantastic write really makes us wonder are we really alone?
A wonderful read...Thank you for sharing!
-GS
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Thanks GS for your mind words. Star watching does put us in our place which is good.
Regards,.. read moreThanks GS for your mind words. Star watching does put us in our place which is good.
Regards,
Alan
Your story was absolutely breathtaking. Every word you released, transported me to a picture, a film, in which I myself, am watching the sparkling sky with great wonder. Fantastic vocabulary enwraps your work, as it only encourages the magnificent atmosphere. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us.
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Wow. What a great review. Thanks again. It is wonderful and we are fortunate if we can be in awe at .. read moreWow. What a great review. Thanks again. It is wonderful and we are fortunate if we can be in awe at this world around us.
Cheers
Alan
Star gazing is just wonderful, it really opens up the mind to all kinds of thought. Where we came from, is there other life out there. There is something so magnificent about the night sky. Everyone should take the time to study it. One of the things on my bucket list is to see the Northern lights. As a poet, the heavens have featured in some of my work and I have written about the Northern lights as well. I really enjoy your style of writing Alan, and this subject is just my cup of tea. Thank you.
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Thanks again Christine. I like to try different things and this is more straightforward. Did you spo.. read moreThanks again Christine. I like to try different things and this is more straightforward. Did you spot the twist at the end? The starwatcher is seeing the sky from a planet with two moons - so he is 'other life' out their. By the way i've been lucky to see the aurora from here, Fife, a few times. But you have to out in the dark and looking.
Cheers,
Alan
That is a clever ending Alan. Certainly a twist. Lucky you seeing the aurora, I have only seen it on.. read moreThat is a clever ending Alan. Certainly a twist. Lucky you seeing the aurora, I have only seen it on film. Even then it was spectacular. Have a great day.
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Ta. Probably a walk and then writing group tonight. I'll be trying to scare them!
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Ha, ha. You will with that piece I reviewed yesterday
This is probably one my favorite feelings: facing something grander than yourself which it's presence and beauty sums into something magnificently complex.
The unknown is still too humongous for our minds yet so present.
Words do fail when you are watching something as awe inspiring as the stars…..which makes it kinda difficult to mention in a story, but you’ve done a great job here with it Alan.
I doubt there will ever be a resolution to our many thoughts of the night sky, but it sure beats being stuck in front of the telly
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I'm lucky to have spent a lot of time out in the dark and high in the mountains where the sky is ama.. read moreI'm lucky to have spent a lot of time out in the dark and high in the mountains where the sky is amazing. If you live in a city you never see the stars. I bet stone age humans knew all about the sky.
Thanks for reading this Lorry.
Alan
Are we alone?
I've been pondering over this since I read this.
Almost pictured myself stargazing!!
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Thanks Ayesha. I think no but we probably will not know the answer unless they find us first. Meanwh.. read moreThanks Ayesha. I think no but we probably will not know the answer unless they find us first. Meanwhile we have plenty of problems here to sort out!
Regards,
Alan
i have done the same things as i`m sure we all have and i came to the conclusion at a young age as to who they are,not are they there but who and why..now that i`m older i still wonder who they really are
I love this! Your writing is more poetic & lyrical than usual here, yet there's also your signature cerebral treatment, where you analyze things even as you present your observations artfully. It's a tantalizing combination & I recommend that you do it more often! This reminds me of when I had legs that worked & I could hike to the top of any mountain with ease . . . it gave me the same sensations as you describe so eloquently in paragraph 3 . . . the hugeness which makes all the pettiness of everyday life very forgettable. I also like the way this is written in a more conversational tone than is your usual style. It almost feels like I'm going there with you & you're showing me the way (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie
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Great! The sky is breathtaking when you get away from the lights. I've spent a few memorable nights .. read moreGreat! The sky is breathtaking when you get away from the lights. I've spent a few memorable nights sleeping in the open at 10,000 feet. I hoped you picked up my twist at the end! The stargazer watches two moons rising so he must be on another planet. So - we are not alone! (Samuel did!)
I suppose this is this story is the teacher in me coming out.
Cheers, alan
Sorry to ignore your main query in this poem . . . it's so strong & compelling, I forgot to mention .. read moreSorry to ignore your main query in this poem . . . it's so strong & compelling, I forgot to mention it! I love such wondering about the universe! *smile*
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Sorry for that - I think I must be from another planet. By the way I've taken up your suggestion of .. read moreSorry for that - I think I must be from another planet. By the way I've taken up your suggestion of a 'baby write' - quite a challenge for me!.
All the best, alan
A wonderful evening of star-gazing, ending with a Bradbury twist--I love it. My first keen interest was in airplanes, which later became rockets and spaceships. News of the Sputnik launch and America's efforts to counter were as exciting to me as Santa Claus. I built plastic models of anything aeronautical and dreamed of space flight. I lay in the yard on summer nights, scanning the heavens for a passing satellite (Telstar) and also for UFO's. I became very interested in sci-fi, the works of Bradbury, Rod Serling and other writers of the late 50's and early 60's. I learned about lenses and tried to build telescopes. Eventually, Dad bought me a cheap store-bought one and I saw some of Jupiter's moons. You see why I like this so much?
Thanks Samuel - and I've got another story for free wrapped up in a review. Yes - it was so exciting.. read moreThanks Samuel - and I've got another story for free wrapped up in a review. Yes - it was so exciting back in the fifties and sixties following all the space shots. These youngsters today are losing out!
Regards fron Scotland, Alan
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I'm sorry I got carried away, blabbering on about myself like that.
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Not at all Samuel. It was great that you took the time write back in such a personal and pertinent w.. read moreNot at all Samuel. It was great that you took the time write back in such a personal and pertinent way. Regards.
Alan
Your story was absolutely breathtaking. Every word you released, transported me to a picture, a film, in which I myself, am watching the sparkling sky with great wonder. Fantastic vocabulary enwraps your work, as it only encourages the magnificent atmosphere. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us.
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Thanks for reading. I hope you have the chance to see the night sky sometimes. If you live in the ci.. read moreThanks for reading. I hope you have the chance to see the night sky sometimes. If you live in the city its not easy. I look forward to reading more from you.
Regards, alan
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It's quite impossible to see the stars from the city. But, when I see them, I never stop. I'm quite .. read moreIt's quite impossible to see the stars from the city. But, when I see them, I never stop. I'm quite delighted with your work, Alan. I hope I get to read more of your words.
Married with three kids, I retired early from teaching physics but have always enjoyed mountains. In my forties I experienced a manic episode which kick-started a creative urge. I've written a novel .. more..