that lovely afterward

we rest among the tendrils
between intermix

and cooling colour
of what has just occurred

oasis after lusty thirst
satiated beyond words

where captured moment lingers
in that lovely afterward

and lipstick smear
a fingerprint

that tells us
we were here

Reviews

[linear]

Ah....romantic poetry.....it glides and slides, leaves one in the writer's afterglow...
A pleasure to read ★

[Brianna Brie]

You have captured that bliss right after sex. Well done!

[Kaylor Mason]

Beautiful. Much more exquisite than a man lighting up a cigarette

[A.A.Romanczuk]

a feeling that just burns itself into the particles of the universe...and the poet plays fisherman with his pen-net capturing the most alluring fish that steams with tropical shades of passion...

[paul]

stunning writing.

[Lovely Lady]

Exquisite.

[writing mojo]

written to the finest preserved...amazing stuff

[ScaryTrees]

bravo
well written and lovely

"where captured moment lingers
in that lovely afterward"

nice write

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

There is serenity in your poems.Your words flow with ease..indeed a beautiful afterwards.An apt title too.

[Siddhartha]

Oh, you always express so much in such a few amount of words, it is as if Hemingway has started writing poetry. The economy of words and the resonance of emotions and memories is spellbinding.