distance does not sway

distance does not sway

these thoughts away

from softly silken lips.

 

tyranny arrives inside

the moments wasted

biding precious time.

 

seems years must pass

through semi-dark beyond

grasp of tender tactile touch,

 

holding breath instead

of counting steps

towards those softly

 

silken lips away from

thoughts that distance

cannot sway. 

Reviews

[Khitii Lae-Ahn]

L'amour ne peut pas etre empeche par la distance

Ni la terre ni la mer peut separer le coeu de sa maison

Vous etes ma maison
seul porteur mon coeur
gardien de mon essence

Je suis tout a vous

Toujours, K


C'est un poeme a couper le souffle
Delicate mais rempli de passion et de desir

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. so true and beautiful ... brimming with longing ... beyond time and endlessly ... i think sometimes that ... that love awaits us ... the one that's plush because it's soaked in romance ... and filled with dreams ...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

such delicate care you take inside this composition~ repetition like a pulse at the beginning~ in pause at center reach~ heart beads to pulse again at closure that is a beginning in and of itself~
tantalizing inhale exhale~ moves the poem on a breath~