rosey red

last night

you kissed me

in my dream

 

in

rosey red
i wont forget

 

you gave

it to me
willingly

 

that's how
i knew it was
a dream.

Reviews

[TAO]

wow... now this one has a very sharp point. nice work.

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. haha! ... alan, you have an amazingly scientific way of knowing when it's a dream and when it's not ... sheer wizardry with brevity ... outstanding!!! ... :) ...