rosey red

rosey red

A Poem by alan peter kelly

last night

you kissed me

in my dream

 

in

rosey red
i wont forget

 

you gave

it to me
willingly

 

that's how
i knew it was
a dream.

© 2011 alan peter kelly


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very sweet a great compliment to someone

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quite the logical deduction! What a lovely shot this little sad piece is.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ohh I enjoyed this, especially the ending. Very well done, I like. ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


So that is how one tells dreams apart from reality...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simple and heartbreaking. Wonderful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yep! Who can't relate to this? You kissed me in rosey red... great image.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simple and pretty with an echoing pitpat heart beat

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

actually, that dream kiss is far more important than a dreamy kiss

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

ripe like a berry that leaves its residual trails after a single delicate crush of teeth~sweet down the chin and under into the hollows where dreams are born and fill up like cream inside the sacramental body of . . . . . lush luscious . . . .

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Whoever it is would be lucky to kiss you. Just sayin.......

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 3, 2010
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