scripted murder

crow flies straight into heartland

of long lived experience.

 

the beautiful moon is an aeon

in harvested memory.

 

on the not so distant horizon

my scripted murder waits for me.

 

 

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

there's such a beautiful blending here of the classic gothic with modern surrealism through the embedded enigmatic quality which elevates this poem to the upper tiers of seamlessly constructed language~
haunting melodious in its seamless unfolding of fate~

[Miss Coral]

Very simple, but very powerful piece- the last line really makes a statement. Beautifully conveyed- gorgeous imagery and language.

-Coral-

[Wildfleour]

(What Selene said). :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

A beautifully written piece...yet as Ed said, it is just another form of dying...often I think perhaps we die more as we live than when we physically die...of course, Your reference to murder could be just that :) Lovely work :)

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. hmmm ... scripted murder? ... an extremely scary thought ... powerfully expressed, alan ...

[Ed Hart]

i used to think that, and maybe it's still true, but murder's just another form of dying, and i'm an advocate of the balance of deserving enterprise