metaphor moon

best to choose

vicarious distance

removed

from visceral

blood smatterings

entombed

within each

endearing revelation.

clear air

between

biological divides...

no musky

pheramonal

diversions if you

don't mind...

best to swim

from risk

beyond

localised rip...

basking

in shoreline

shoals

wards torment

elsewhere...

staves steady

ascent

in compound

fractures

to an already

brittle

perception

of metaphor

moon

 

 

 

Reviews

[xjust-for-me.x]

Excellent I enjoyed it very much. I have always admired your writes....

[paul]

vicarious distance - amazing.
biological divides ... beautiful... and is bio really logical anyway ??
your writing is tough and unique
like a beautiful prize fighter
sweet science

[emmah]

how delicate - how brittle tonight - the faint glimmer of this - shadow of the moon - there is such starkness - such beauty - such serenity - floating in this piece - it pierces the soul!!!

[Pax Analog]

A flinty affirmation of both literal solitude and the commonality of telepresence.

Under that moonshine's "damned if you do, damned if you don't" when it comes to those pesky pheromonal distractions. ;-)

[...]

. an endearing revelation indeed ... all the way ... the journey to finding what we can and can't withstand ... whether it's risks or proximity ... is so often about space ... and you define your space with excellence here ...

[Ed Hart]

like shards of broken glass...ah, this one goes here

[Moonflower]

This was amazing, dear.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

You just get better and better every time i read you...you outdo yourself with each new write of yours.I am always in awe of your skill with words..

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Breathtaking, Alan..exquisitely breathtaking! Such a beautiful tapestry of words...

[writing mojo]

This is so amazing...it flew me to the moon, and left me tongue tied on your word's fertile gravity.. good stuff